大学英语四级考试写作典型范文的点评

It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel current is about 68.2%. Other kind of novels current is, reletively , about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.

It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate. However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.

Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper... Because I want do to a good job in my subjects. Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I ve gained other things--I found a solid basic knowledge about my majormake me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books!

点评：

切题。

论证比较有力，表达思想清楚。

文字通顺，连贯性较好，但有个别语言错误。

注： 文中划线部分为原文的一些明显语言错误，括号里的为修改建议，为保持原文面貌，对于结构没有做过多改动。